Your suit looks good, man!
I have, however, noticed something that might get your app denied.
You've got a brigade symbol on your un-approved kit. If I remember correctly, having ANY brigade symbol on your kit before approval in the MMCC will result in an automatic app denial.
Since you've done such an awesome job on the shoulders (and the entire rest of the kit), I suggest just making an extra shoulder bell so you don't have to destroyer the paint job on said shoulder plate.
Other than that, I seen nothing that might get your kit turned down. Seriously awesome work, man!