Kayel Tork

[Remo Jadd]

 a lot better, but do as A'den said and you're good to go. 

[Ori Cabur]

Kayel, I think that you should take some black paint to the bottom nylon straps that are on your shins.
They are the only straps that really scream at me, due to the white on black.
I'm gonna be buyin some cotton rope here in a little bit, maybe you and i can go in on it, and each make a girthbelt?
We'll get you there ner'vod 






So, A'den, some small adjustments and a Girthbelt/sash, and he's on his way?

[Hondo Karr]

Yup!

[Ori Cabur]

Roger that 

[Kayel Tork]

Thanks for the replies and sounds good to me Ori, lets getter done!

[Tassone Phoenix]

I know you are almost good to go and ready to send in that app, but I was wondering why a loincloth instead of a cod?  You have a good amount of armor coverage and it seems weird (to me) to not have an armored cod and instead go for the loincloth.  If you keep the loincloth, may I suggest a "beefier" looking one. Maybe you can us a thicker fabric or make it wider even. To me it just seems to "light" and doesn't go for your heavier armor look. Well that is my two cents. Good job so far and I love that weathering. You really dirtied it up

 On a related note: When I was building my kit, I made a cod and a loin cloth to chose from. I tried on the cod and I thought it looked really dumb on me and didn't look right. A cod didn't fit my kit and didn't work for my body shape. My family agreed so I tried on the loin cloth and as you can see in my sig that is what I decided to go with.  Some people prefer a cod while some prefer a loincloth. I say it all depends on the person and the look of the kit.

[Mandalore the Uniter]

I totally agree with Tassone about the looks of the loin cloth.  The current loin cloth on Kayel looks very hap-hazard and low quality.  Basically looks like you wrapped some fabric around the ammo belt and are letting it hang down. 

[Kayel Tork]

I dont have pictures just yet, but I finished my cod piece tonight.

[Spanner Murraan]

I would also pull the belt up to just under the belly plate.  It will do wonders to lengthen your lower body, and improve your posture.